Why to avoid “ing” words in fiction


D. Wallace Peach with a lesson in grammar- Oh, oh!

Myths of the Mirror

A few weeks ago, I had a blog-conversation with Jacqui Murray of Worddreams about editing out gerunds (those “ing” words). I’ve heard many times that these words should be avoided when writing fiction but never understood why. While some writing no-nos stab me in the eye every time I read them (such as filter words), gerunds never really bothered me.

So, a little research later, here’s the scoop:

Gerunds do three things:

They express ongoing action when combined with auxiliary (helping) verbs:
She was washing her hands.
The snow will be piling up all night.

They act as nouns:
Vacuuming kept the dog hair to a minimum.
Walking helps me stay healthy.

They act as adjectives:
The falling apple bonked her on the head.
A failing grade won’t get me into college.

Opportunity #1

Present, future, and past progressive verb combinations

When combined with little “helping” verbs such as

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  1. Thanks again for sharing, Jacquie. Hoping you’re enjoying writing while having a relaxing afternoon. 🙂

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    1. Tax time- yuck!

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      1. Oh. I’m pretending that it isn’t, but you’re right. Ugh.

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  2. This is a really useful post. A lot more info than the simple ‘avoid gerunds’ sort of approach.

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    1. And it’s in layman’s terms! lol

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  3. I always balk a little at hard and fast rules of writing. The truth is that gerunds have their place in good writing. So do adjectives. But this close look at how gerunds might frequently be used incorrectly is useful.

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    1. And while what I said about adjectives is true, of course I meant that adverbs have their place in good writing, even though there are plenty of writers who will insist that they don’t.🤦

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      1. I think as long as the writing is smooth, anything goes 🙂

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    2. Some of her examples made me smile 🙂

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      1. Me too. And I was happy to discover that while I have been guilty of committing such sins, they are some of the very things I or my critique partners are quick to spot and correct.

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